Sunday, February 27, 2011

bad sunday haiku...again


I.

sisyphus said, "i'm
going downhill, again." i
wake. sisyphus said...


II.

spring threatens us with
thaw, but don't you believe it:
snowflakes never melt.

4 comments:

  1. W.T. PfefferleFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    good stuff!

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  2. Contingent CassandraFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    My only complaint is that I'm not sure these actually qualify as *bad* haiku. Miserable, yes. Bad -- not really.

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  3. StrelnikovFebruary 27, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    Just play "Sunday Morning" by the Velvet Undergound....things might get better.

    Or not.

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  4. The Contemplative CynicFebruary 28, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    Love the last line! Snowflakes never melt. Truer more depressing words have never been spoken.

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