Wednesday, September 19, 2012

first bad haiku for a new semester


I. 

i prick my finger
on the hawthorn tree -- it stings
like these first rough drafts.


II.

o, adminiflake!
your shiny emptiness is
a beacon to none.


III.

o, proffieflake!  thank you
for taking my idea.
the crow steals gold, too.


IV.

autumn's chill:  fleece and
jeans to the meeting?  yes, but --
sadly -- no vodka. 

5 comments:

  1. I love love love the Greta!

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  2. Lovely! You can always sneak those little airplane bottles in. :)

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  3. Ah; now I feel the CM semester has truly begun. I especially like the play between the shiny objects in II and III -- fool's gold and real gold.

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  4. Hi Greta! So glad to see you onscreen.

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