They need MUCH more practice. The camera needs a tripod. They guy in the tree looks as if his belt buckle was undone, too. Was he planning upon leaping onto unsuspecting passers-by? And then singing at them?
The guy in the tree is way creepy. And pink shirt boy is over emoting, which is distracting. I do kind of love the geeky, clumsy tumbling/ballet dancing interlude.
The tree guy really is creepy. I wonder whose idea that was: "Dude, sit in the tree and undress... the chicks will dig that"?????
Tree guy definitely is creepy, especially at the end. I think there may be some confusion throughout, but especially on his part, between "I want it" and "people want me." Not so fast, dude. B+ for nice architecture (and creative use thereof), C for the moves, and the oddly matched/mismatched costuming ("let's all wear khakis on the bottom, but not worry about whether they actually match, and go wild with shirt choice").