Miss, can you please help me. Please explain how to organize essay point by point or subject by subject.This is with regard to an essay they got back today. This student got an F but can rewrite it for his final portfolio. Also, I let them out 15 minutes early so that those who wanted to talk to me about rewrites could do so. He did not stay.
Stella wrote a while back about the detailed notes we give for this kind of essay. Like Stella, I told them to write this shit down. I gave handouts.
The bummer of it is, I like this student. He's a sweetie. He has written some okay stuff, and he struggles with English. But WTF? I'm not gonna review this shit through the kid's cell phone.
What the fuck are these people thinking? What the fuck are they just thinking?
So I told him no, I can't do that via e-mail, and he should review his notes, the ones I know he did not take.